I think this piece is really well done, though perhaps the horses might look better in different colors? They're all the same white/ black socked.Though I know it probably wouldn't work too great with the dark atmosphere, but something to try, if you haven't already, and I notice you drew the horses hooves so that you didn't have to draw the underside (the bottom, where the horses shoes would go). Perhaps, on the second horse from the right of the image, the one that seems to be the closest rearing horse. You could alter to show that? Otherwise Good! <3
I understand the remark, but after some tests with differents colors I found here broke this feeling horde compact.
I wanted to say a lot more than what I was allowed in the comment box (silly max characters). I just wanted to offer it up as a chance to see what it would look like, the colors itself wasn't anything I was worried about I was just trying to be a good critic and offer up ideas. ! I really liked the painting as it was~ I offered up my opinions because it offered me the chance.
I agree that you could try adding colours to the horses. They don't have to be strong colours, but just a small hint of them so they would look more like the ones in the bible. But otherwise i really love this picture!